19th February, 1976
I arrived at this place 115 days ago, and this morning I thought that I couldn't stand this situation one more day. However my pessimistic attitude has changed.
When I woke up this morning I though that the day would be as usual. Moreover I was very dejected because after the last storm, I had lost all my possessions. The only thing that I could recover was my knife and my notebook because I had protected them. Besides I lost my illusion to exist, I thought that the life didn’t have any sense.
But while I was having breakfast my coconut, as every day, I listened to a strange noise, but familiar. From that moment my purpose changed, that noise was wonderful, that was a plane!
I started to wave my t-shirt in the air during the time that the plane was visible, and after it disappeared.
Now I am very nervous and I have the expectation that they have seen me. I hope that in few days I can be at home writing the success of the rescue…
I arrived at this place 115 days ago, and this morning I thought that I couldn't stand this situation one more day. However my pessimistic attitude has changed.
When I woke up this morning I though that the day would be as usual. Moreover I was very dejected because after the last storm, I had lost all my possessions. The only thing that I could recover was my knife and my notebook because I had protected them. Besides I lost my illusion to exist, I thought that the life didn’t have any sense.
But while I was having breakfast my coconut, as every day, I listened to a strange noise, but familiar. From that moment my purpose changed, that noise was wonderful, that was a plane!
I started to wave my t-shirt in the air during the time that the plane was visible, and after it disappeared.
Now I am very nervous and I have the expectation that they have seen me. I hope that in few days I can be at home writing the success of the rescue…
posted by haddom @ 9:38 AM
4 comments
4 Comments:
Why don't you try to review your piece of writing again?
There are sentences which don't make sense.
Can you improve it and I'll go back to your piece shortly.
Hi haddom,
What an original diary!! Good luck in your searching.
Bye.
Some more comments. I hope they help. Pay attention!!!
In English...
You arrive AT
I could't STAND this
I thought that life didn’t have ANY sense.
WHAT DO YOU MEAN HERE:
Moreover I was very dejected because after the last storm, I had lost the little that I had.
You had lost WHAT? HOPE? Add it!
What about writing a bit more! Time, isn't it?
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