MINI SAGA: A STRANGE JOURNEYI could see the gun of my fellow traveller while he was keeping a spectacular necklace inside my handbag. Our plane landed, I went through customs and he got in the taxi with me. In a traffic light, he gave me a precious ring; he caught my bag and disappeared.
3 Comments:
Good job!!! What a thriller in just 50 words!
I'd just say:
I WENT THROUGH customs...
and... beware the spelling of LIGHT!!!
Hi haddom,
thanks for your comment. Yes, for sure life would be very different 70 years from now. It'd be fantastic we had teleportation, and time travelling and quantum computers.
Let's see what we will get...
I've liked your mini-saga, it is like a little thriller.
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